here's the poster that i've been working on for Pegasus. its not totally perfect yet . . . i'm going to go back in to fix the top of the girl's hair . . .
oh pegasus :) i love the girl's facial expression and the way you did the title overall composition is solid one question/suggestion... is there any way to make the girl look less pasted on and more a part of the composition as a whole? maybe less intensity of color on her part or draw more of her color into the background? not sure just a thought :)
I agree with Adel about the color. One technical Maria-type suggestion is that the Joan MacLeod line, the 8 pm line and the murder line at the bottom look too close to her face for information text.
The letters in the background give nice depth and I can image maybe what the play will be about a little more. Maybe just the screen, but the drop shadow for the top text seems a little severe. Perhaps add a hint of color to the drop shadows to add depth and unify with the face?
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here's the poster that i've been working on for Pegasus. its not totally perfect yet . . . i'm going to go back in to fix the top of the girl's hair . . .
oh pegasus :)
ReplyDeletei love the girl's facial expression and the way you did the title
overall composition is solid
one question/suggestion...
is there any way to make the girl look less pasted on and more a part of the composition as a whole?
maybe less intensity of color on her part or draw more of her color into the background? not sure just a thought :)
haha, that's exactly what i've been working on . . . :) i'll put up the latest version when i get it to a point that i'm satisfied with it!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Adel about the color. One technical Maria-type suggestion is that the Joan MacLeod line, the 8 pm line and the murder line at the bottom look too close to her face for information text.
ReplyDeleteThe letters in the background give nice depth and I can image maybe what the play will be about a little more. Maybe just the screen, but the drop shadow for the top text seems a little severe. Perhaps add a hint of color to the drop shadows to add depth and unify with the face?
excellent suggestion katherine...i always forget about adding color into the drop shadow
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